tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5586686668015179901.post9071510374004121406..comments2023-03-28T09:02:16.996-05:00Comments on Tournesol ~ dans un jardin: river speaks (haiga)Unknownnoreply@blogger.comBlogger10125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5586686668015179901.post-65165292395055248312014-09-19T20:59:39.856-05:002014-09-19T20:59:39.856-05:00It was complete at `seagulls` adding the rest is s...It was complete at `seagulls` adding the rest is sharing my individual process...probably too much information:)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15686112030059549498noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5586686668015179901.post-57478205242295879772014-09-18T23:08:57.955-05:002014-09-18T23:08:57.955-05:00Lovely...I was raised by the riverside ...on the s...Lovely...I was raised by the riverside ...on the side of the sunrise too:)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15686112030059549498noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5586686668015179901.post-66825931342566959612014-09-18T23:07:31.593-05:002014-09-18T23:07:31.593-05:00A nice place to be...always, all seasons, the rive...A nice place to be...always, all seasons, the river listens and inspires.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15686112030059549498noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5586686668015179901.post-37090247360256183122014-09-18T23:06:30.577-05:002014-09-18T23:06:30.577-05:00Grazie, Cara...a pearl...wow, I am touched!Grazie, Cara...a pearl...wow, I am touched!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15686112030059549498noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5586686668015179901.post-74788009276122701742014-09-18T21:28:10.053-05:002014-09-18T21:28:10.053-05:00tomorrow the sun will rise
on the same new river
...tomorrow the sun will rise<br />on the same new river<br /><br />cheers<br />JzBJazzbumpahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07337490817307473659noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5586686668015179901.post-61989546891461991202014-09-18T15:55:54.645-05:002014-09-18T15:55:54.645-05:00Your wonderful imagery had me standing on that riv...Your wonderful imagery had me standing on that river bank.Janicehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10359355308140058671noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5586686668015179901.post-39896040690941180932014-09-18T12:41:49.233-05:002014-09-18T12:41:49.233-05:00This is a fine power post Cher ... each stanza is ...This is a fine power post Cher ... each stanza is a pearl.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13596079559559123392noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5586686668015179901.post-64461568049370655462014-09-18T11:03:34.813-05:002014-09-18T11:03:34.813-05:00Beautiful solo renga, Cheryl. I too was drawn in b...Beautiful solo renga, Cheryl. I too was drawn in by the "beyond conception" line. I also dig the seagull echos. I'd love to see another two line capping verse to complete it. :) Lollyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16526692343815904632noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5586686668015179901.post-16568023334757578832014-09-17T23:36:06.110-05:002014-09-17T23:36:06.110-05:00Thank you...I sat on it for hours until I got the ...Thank you...I sat on it for hours until I got the second line to match what I thought. Times I wish I had a better vocabularly or could draw.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15686112030059549498noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5586686668015179901.post-73788076190695927802014-09-17T23:25:46.351-05:002014-09-17T23:25:46.351-05:00Very powerful - those first three lines had me rea...Very powerful - those first three lines had me reall thinking - beyond conception - wonderful line. the tiny gnat's circular movements, too, takingus back to the sun again, really clever, Beautiful ending.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18329773014118837806noreply@blogger.com