Tournesol is still tilling the soil dans un jardin; slowly planting a seed here and there, hoping to see poetry blossom...a labour of love.
This blog will host short form poetry such as Haiku, Tanka, Tilus, Lanturne, Shadorma, Senryû...
I have chosen a song that I have loved for years. My children were teens when it came out and I remember purchased the Tape (yes it is that old). I was shocked when I heard the other songs so hard and loud compared to this one song. So I gave the tape to my son and my daughter made a tape of mixes with this song on "each" side, for my long drive to and from Toronto.
The guitar and the music speak to me "more than words".
I've included the lyrics at the end.
The goal is to write a four stanza renga inspired on the song of our choice
Extreme - More Than Words
that look in blue liquid eyes so much promise
our union spontaneous communion of souls
engaged, in silence touching, transcending authentic love
exhaling you with each pore you inhale, more than words
Saying I love you Is not the words I want to hear from you It's not that I want you Not to say, but if you only knew How easy it would be to show me how you feel More than words is all you have to do to make it real Then you wouldn't have to say that you love me 'Cause I'd already know What would you do if my heart was torn in two More than words to show you feel That your love for me is real What would you say if I took those words away Then you couldn't make things new Just by saying I love you
More than words
Now that I've tried to talk to you and make you understand All you have to do is close your eyes And just reach out your hands and touch me Hold me close don't ever let me go More than words is all I ever needed you to show Then you wouldn't have to say that you love me 'Cause I'd already know
What would you do if my heart was torn in two More than words to show you feel That your love for me is real What would you say if I took those words away Then you couldn't make things new Just by saying I love you
This prompt is a tan renga challenge. Our host has chosen a haiku written by Magical Mystical Teacher (MMT). It was her response on this haiku by Basho:
how rare! on leaving the mountain the first eggplant
MMT's response haiku was the following:
how rare the sight— yellow blossoms brushing the sky with light
now we are to write a tan renga two lines of 7 syllables to this haiku. Our host`s tan renga is here:
how rare the sight— yellow blossoms brushing the sky with light(MMT) I always will love her underneath the Laburnum(Chèvrefeuille) I struggled with various responses becasue I had several images of "yellow blossoms" from my personal life. So I broke it down to two and here they are:
Across
the street from the church at my hometown, there is a small garden by the
river, with various flowers.I remember
taking a picture in June of the lovely yellow lilies and wished I could come
back later in the summer to catch the flora at its peak in blossoming.Well, I did not but here is a snapshot from
June.
how rare the sight— yellow blossoms brushing the sky with
light
Across the
church, newly weds
yellow lilies
cheer them on. (c) Tournesol
Of course
there are also lovely daisies and sun roots in my friend’s garden in Bromont
facing several mountains. This is where we went to celebrate their 50th
wedding anniversary last Sunday. A huge tent was pitched next to the Willow tree…what a
lovely day celebrating such a lovely couple. To this day, I have never met a
loving couple like these two people. You can feel the love they share. They
still cuddle and always hold hands sitting close together.
(c) Clr '14
(c) Clr '14
how rare the sight— yellow blossoms brushing the sky with
light