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Untimely sunsests

© C.L.R. 2014
Under sun kissed skies
she gasps at lavish blossoms
nature`s final act

sodden  sense of sadness
inhales it all with wonder

I missed the sun
untimely sunsets tell a tale
announcing autumn

© Tournesol '14

© C.L.R. 2014

Submitted for  Carpe Diem's Vision Quest # 1 day 2, "an empty shell"
and Haiku Horizons - Sense


Posted by Cheryl-Lynn Roberts, 2014/08/27
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23 comments:

  1. Jules27/8/14 9:41 am

    Sunsets are just different beginnings...
    As the day retires...may our life continue with blessings!

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    1. Unknown27/8/14 11:50 am

      Being a night owl, sunsets are really my dawn of the day:)

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  2. Anonymous27/8/14 10:15 am

    Wonderful capture of summer's end -- words and photography!!

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    1. Unknown27/8/14 11:52 am

      Thank you, for reading...I do love autumn as well with the lush colours changing.

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  3. Chèvrefeuille27/8/14 3:01 pm

    Departing Summer ... caught in a nice haiku and with a great photo ... This style of writing looks somewhat like Tan Renga, I belief that Jules uses this way of writing also.

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    1. Unknown27/8/14 8:16 pm

      I like using this sometimes to complete a thought or challenge myself with the second part which is a break...I forget where I learned this but I often find it challenging.

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  4. brudberg27/8/14 3:10 pm

    That departing summer.. I feel that intensely.

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    1. Unknown27/8/14 8:17 pm

      It is with mixed feelings I feel it leaving.

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  5. Unknown27/8/14 7:00 pm

    hmm I just breathe in the words

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    1. Unknown27/8/14 8:17 pm

      Thank you so much for your kind words and for reading:)

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  6. Anonymous27/8/14 8:30 pm

    so sad - the realization that autumn (and winter) is on its way -- where did the time go?

    Great post --

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    1. Unknown27/8/14 9:21 pm

      What saddens me is not having my break on time to see the sunsets at my dinner soon...but I do have a 30 mins one at 5 ish...when the sun starts setting, I sometimes ask permission to run up to the roof.

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    2. Anonymous28/8/14 9:49 pm

      Will we see photos then? :)
      Hoping you get lots of sunset breaks.

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  7. Anonymous27/8/14 11:09 pm

    sublime work , Cheryl ! i fell in love with the last verse !

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    1. Unknown28/8/14 1:44 am

      Thank you so much for your most kind words, I am truly humbled:)

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  8. Michael28/8/14 3:27 pm

    You created some beautiful images Cheryl-Lynn, I loved the flow and rhythm of your words.

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    1. Unknown28/8/14 3:58 pm

      Thanks so much, Michael, I'm glad you enjoyed this.

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  9. Mark30/8/14 8:19 am

    Timely or untimely, there is always a tale in sunsets.

    Sensing Wetness and Making Sense

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    1. Unknown30/8/14 10:18 pm

      Sunsets are endless tales of love, lost and in between.

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  10. Gillena Cox30/8/14 10:05 am

    A lovely -- of beginnings and endings

    Much love...

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  11. Anonymous30/8/14 3:13 pm

    I used to weep in autumn... till I moved much further south. Thanks for reminding me I did the right thing. :-) Nice haiku.

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    1. Unknown30/8/14 10:19 pm

      I only weep at the end of November for a few weeks and pray for the snow to cover the darkness.

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