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2014/10/02

bee's scent (haiga)

© C.L.R. 2014


despite workplace file,
yields and melts in the fire,
perfume stirs the bee

© Tournesol '14

Write a haiku with 3 randomly chosen words.
I found file, fire, perfume at Creativity Games


                                                                                                                     

8 comments:

  1. I agree, lovely last verse

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    1. Thanks, I get nervous if I wear floral perfume though ;)

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  2. I too found the last line wonderful. Very well-penned. :-)
    Thanks for participating this week.
    -HA

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    1. I wrote outside my comfort level chancing words I was not sure I could write with. But I guess that was the point of this exercise:)

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  3. Lovely and what good fortune! Brava a great ku!

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