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love has
no bounds
despite
the blazing heat,
cicada sings
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gasping
silence
broken, cicada
flicks her wing
© Tournesol '14
More info on Cicadas here
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A nice set Cheryl Lynn ... I like that first one the most ... that second one gives me a feeling of sadness ...
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DeleteHmm, then I did not portray what I meant properly...the cicada in the first stanza is male and he sings to seduce the female; the female flicks her wing to respond; perhaps I should change it to
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seduced, one hears
...flick of her wing