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2014/10/02

bee's scent (haiga)

© C.L.R. 2014


despite workplace file,
yields and melts in the fire,
perfume stirs the bee

© Tournesol '14

For MindLoveMiserysMenagerie
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I found file, fire, perfume at Creativity Games


                                                                                                                     
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8 comments:

  1. Amrit Sinha2/10/14 4:58 am

    Love that last line :-)

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  2. Anonymous2/10/14 12:05 pm

    I agree, lovely last verse

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    1. Unknown2/10/14 5:16 pm

      Thanks, I get nervous if I wear floral perfume though ;)

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  3. Anonymous3/10/14 10:32 am

    I too found the last line wonderful. Very well-penned. :-)
    Thanks for participating this week.
    -HA

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    1. Unknown3/10/14 6:05 pm

      I wrote outside my comfort level chancing words I was not sure I could write with. But I guess that was the point of this exercise:)

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  4. Bastet's Waka Library4/10/14 11:00 am

    Lovely and what good fortune! Brava a great ku!

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