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2014/09/12

above the mist (tan renga squared)

                                           
evening mist
memories are fading
loon is calling

© Björn

fox greets the darkness
twilight opens its doors

love mends
above the mist
reaching for the stars

Pleiades embrace their star
wolf howls at the moon.

© Tournesol '14

Wolfe howling at the stars

12 comments:

  1. Wow Cheryl Lynn ... what a mystical continuation ... it makes a magical four stanza renga ...

    Chėvrefeuille (a.k.a Basho2012)

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    1. The haiku spoke to me ...I could not get that out of my head.

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  2. What a wonderful tan renga -- all the creatures embracing night -- and the hidden light ---

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    1. Thanks, Jen. I am thinking I have Spring fever but also Autumn fever for my poetry is influenced by my muse who's seems a bit gaga lately:)

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  3. ah - you've gone full wild here
    the animals appreciate it

    namaste
    JzB

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    1. Yes, I think that is right...the animals are very involved here. Thanks for your kind words :)

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  4. What a voyage .. i love the images you created here ... makes me feel like I should sit back and contemplate the stars and make contact!

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    1. Oh yes, the Pleiades made me think of a book I read years ago with Shirley MacClean...do you remember that? they made a movie but the book was amazing. August skies were never the same after that book for me...

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  5. 'Twilight opens it doors', love it.

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    1. Thank you! and then the party began:)

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  6. That transition - I love the way it glide over into the wolf

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    1. thank you...the wolf saw beyond the mist:)

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