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2014/09/17

river speaks (haiga)


 
(c) C.L.R. 2014


sun dips
beyond conception
listen
 
gnats buzz moving in circles
ducks paddle with the current
 
by the riverside
longing for meaning
seagull echoes


river retreats in silence
secret reflections

 or
twilight emulates clarity
liquid tranquility



(c) Tournesol 2014
Posted by Cheryl-Lynn Roberts, 17/09/2014

Carpe Diem #563 River
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9 comments:

  1. Unknown17/9/14 11:25 pm

    Very powerful - those first three lines had me reall thinking - beyond conception - wonderful line. the tiny gnat's circular movements, too, takingus back to the sun again, really clever, Beautiful ending.

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  2. Unknown17/9/14 11:36 pm

    Thank you...I sat on it for hours until I got the second line to match what I thought. Times I wish I had a better vocabularly or could draw.

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  3. Bastet's Waka Library18/9/14 12:41 pm

    This is a fine power post Cher ... each stanza is a pearl.

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    1. Unknown18/9/14 11:06 pm

      Grazie, Cara...a pearl...wow, I am touched!

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  4. Janice18/9/14 3:55 pm

    Your wonderful imagery had me standing on that river bank.

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    1. Unknown18/9/14 11:07 pm

      A nice place to be...always, all seasons, the river listens and inspires.

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  5. Jazzbumpa18/9/14 9:28 pm

    tomorrow the sun will rise
    on the same new river

    cheers
    JzB

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    1. Unknown18/9/14 11:08 pm

      Lovely...I was raised by the riverside ...on the side of the sunrise too:)

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  6. Unknown19/9/14 8:59 pm

    It was complete at `seagulls` adding the rest is sharing my individual process...probably too much information:)

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