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2014/09/26

winter dreams (haiga)

© C.L.R. '14

scattered petals
tiger lily beds
fallen leaves
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fallen leaves
orange blossoms weave
winter’s  quilt
winter’s quilt
tawny hues share
tranquil dreams

© Tournesol '14

Carpe Diem Sparkling Stars #7, Koyu-Ni's "Tranquil" 


5 comments:

  1. I am attracted to them as much as my beloved daisies this year...perhaps that is because there are so many on the streets of my city and even in my hometown...your comments touch me from such an amazing haiku poet..you truly are gifted!

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  2. Wonderful cascading haiku so fitting for the fallen leaves cycle!

    Happy day to you! artmusedog and carol (A Creative Harbor)

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    1. Thank you, Carol, I appreciate your feedback:)

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  3. this is truely warm and beautiful ... this is an interesting take on Chiyo-ni's haiku .. loved them and especially:

    winter’s quilt
    tawny hues share
    tranquil dreams

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  4. thank you, Cara, I sometimes wonder if I am off in interpretting but I did like those 3 lines too...peaceful dreams:)

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