© C.L.R. '14 |
scattered
petals
tiger
lily beds
fallen
leaves
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fallen
leaves
orange
blossoms weave
winter’s
quilt
~
winter’s
quilt
tawny
hues share
tranquil
dreams
© Tournesol '14
Tournesol is still tilling the soil dans un jardin; slowly planting a seed here and there, hoping to see poetry blossom...a labour of love. This blog will host short form poetry such as Haiku, Tanka, Tilus, Lanturne, Shadorma, Senryû...
© C.L.R. '14 |
I am attracted to them as much as my beloved daisies this year...perhaps that is because there are so many on the streets of my city and even in my hometown...your comments touch me from such an amazing haiku poet..you truly are gifted!
ReplyDeleteWonderful cascading haiku so fitting for the fallen leaves cycle!
ReplyDeleteHappy day to you! artmusedog and carol (A Creative Harbor)
Thank you, Carol, I appreciate your feedback:)
Deletethis is truely warm and beautiful ... this is an interesting take on Chiyo-ni's haiku .. loved them and especially:
ReplyDeletewinter’s quilt
tawny hues share
tranquil dreams
thank you, Cara, I sometimes wonder if I am off in interpretting but I did like those 3 lines too...peaceful dreams:)
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