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2014/09/15

silent crow - corbeau muet (haiku)



sur la pierre tombale
versant mes larmes pour grand-père
corbeau est muet 


feuilles tombent en abondance
leaves falling in abundance

~

on the tombstone
weeping tears for grandfather
silent crow. 

© Tournesol '14




Originally posted by Cheryl-Lynn Roberts 2014/09/15


I was too tempted to add that middle between the French and English haiku. I know it does not make it a tanka or tan renga but it just seemed to fit. clr

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