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2014/08/20

Bones (senryû)

 
 
Prompt: Bones
Bones 
wildflowers
emerald blankets covering
beds of bones 
 
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beds of bones
sounds of wailing children
haunting the night

 
* 
haunting the night
smell of death and venom
barbarians’ breath
 
© Tournesol '14
 
Posted by Cheryl-Lynn Roberts, 2014/08/19
 

 
 
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6 comments:

  1. Unknown20/8/14 4:35 am

    Very beautifully depicted but scary at at the same time.

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    1. Unknown20/8/14 12:02 pm

      Thanks for visiting, yes it is a bit morbid, i'm afraid.

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  2. Anonymous21/8/14 11:42 pm

    Haunting set. Wailing children especially. Thought provoking.

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    1. Unknown22/8/14 12:42 am

      Thank you, it was a great prompt, thank you for reading.

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  3. Anonymous22/8/14 12:17 pm

    chilling verses ! deep with pathos ! amazing !

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    1. Unknown22/8/14 1:12 pm

      Thank you, I'm pleased you liked the series.

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