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2014/08/22

slow caterpillar (tanka)

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caterpillar crawled
I dreamed I ran in water
treading so slowly
resting on the elm tree branch
a butterfly was born

© Tournesol 2014

Submitted for Carpe Diem's "Little Creatures" #2, "I dreamed I was a butterfly"
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3 comments:

  1. Unknown22/8/14 6:37 pm

    Thanks so much, Janice.

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  2. Anonymous23/8/14 12:44 am

    The vision of the caterpillar treading water - slowly - is just spectacular!

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    1. Unknown23/8/14 12:59 am

      Thanks Jen, I was trying to have two images, my dream of my trying to run in water which is real slow:)

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